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My Beginning and My End

Published by • May 16th, 2016 • Category: Poetry

by Athena Christy, age 11

My best friend
Is my beginning and my end
The most amazing work of art
Is the horse that touched my fragile heart

I watch her day by day
Grow and live and play
A creature so fond of hay
She is so perfect in every way

I say to her ” I won”t leave you”
All because I greatly love her
My precious best friend
My beginning and my end

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  1. Hi!
    This so amazing. You should be proud to be so good at poetry – unfortunately, I can never write poems as meaningful as this. Honestly, this poem is great for all the ponies I’ve been around, the ones I’ve lost and the ones I’m around now. This nearly makes me cry because right now I’m remembering Bella, the pony who was sold before I could have a chance to say goodbye. I just hope that I’m able to stay with Precious!

    I really wish I were as good at writing poems as you are!
    Happy writing,
    PreciousAndMe xx

  2. This is an amazing poem!!! You are a very good poet!!

  3. I all most cried when I read this, your super ay poetry.

  4. Thx so much!
    @PreciousAndMe
    You’ll get the hang of it (poetry). Just practice and try to find out which words rhyme and how you could connect them to a single thought.
    @Rey, @Carey Anne
    Thx! I never thought someone would like my poems and my stories. I was so scared that my poems and stories won’t get published, but now, here they are! Thx again for the support and comments!

  5. Be free to memorize this poem and say it to your horse. Don’t worry, I won’t mind, in fact, I’ll be happy to help girls express their love for their horses and ponies. That’s what friends are for, right?

  6. Good job!!!

  7. Thanks, bluehorse. I’ve already made another poem and will post it several days from now. I’m not sure if its good enough, and I’m not sure if I’ll have the time to post it.
    Thanks again :)

  8. i love this little poem. i am totally going to memorize it and recite it to a lesson horse i ride sometimes peppy. he is totally my beginning and my end

  9. Fantastic poem!

  10. Every time I read this I want to read it over and over again.

  11. Heh. Thanks!

  12. LOL! Thanks everyone for the comments :) So far 6 people liked this in Facebook, which meant progress. Thaaaaaaaaaannnnk you so much everyone! Thx for the support!

  13. love this poem so much! can’t stop reading it. :)

  14. Thanks Sierra!

  15. Amazing! You did a great job writing this! I am not much of a poetry person,so it’s cool to read other people’s poems! :) :) :) :) :)

  16. Really nice ;)