Horseless
Published by GHC • Jun 20th, 2016 • Category: Poetryby sierra, age 12
A dream in my mind
A vision in the air
A sunrise to my heart
A horse
A vivid fantasy
An outstanding beauty
A consistent rythym
A horse
Dark bay was his coat
Ebony was his mane
His ankles touched with a blanket of white
His eyes spoke my name
Into the wind I breathed a desire
Can you be mine?
Two pools of russet dived back deep
How could I not?
A divine gift
A blissful trance
A jubilant cry
A horse
A blessing
A wonder
A never ending dance
My heart forever
My horse
Beautiful. <3
This created a beautiful picture in my mind!! You are a good writer and this poem was amazing!
thanks! :)
I loved this! It all flowed very nicely, and I love the picture it made. :)
I have a pic of my dream horse in my mind. this is awesome I cant write poetry. again awesome :):):):):):)
Wow! This is beautiful! You are so amazing at poetry!
Keep up the fab work,
PAM xx
thanks girls! ya’ll keep me working at my writing! thanks!
sierra
Beautiful! This is amazing. Just like in http://www.horsecrazygirls.com
oh yeah. :)
amazing!
Fascinating!! Love it!!
Amazing! Beautiful! Awesome! I love it!