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Take Me Away

Published by • Sep 27th, 2009 • Category: by Madelaina, Poetry

by Madelaina, age 13

As cloud comes today
You take me away
To find that silver lining
and be the sun rays shining.

Rain might stop our rides,
Wash away that groom
But no matter the high tides
Love sings in full bloom.

Whenever there’s a storm
Things may be forlorn
But rainbows always come
And we go to where they’re from.

As cloud comes today
You take me away
To find that silver lining
and be the sun rays shining.

9 Nickers »

  1. wow…..what can I say to THAT? So uplifting, girl! Keep it up!

  2. i like the repetition at the beginning and ending. it’s very beautiful and the words are lilting. awesome!

  3. Great poem!:)

  4. Beautiful poem Madelaina! I love how you compare riding with the weather, rain sure does ruin our effort to keep our horses groomed, doesn’t it!

  5. i love the poem.. its what i call a bubbly little burst for the day! Champion ryhming.. im feeling uplifted this morning! =0)

    ~HF

  6. Awesome job, girl!!! That was a great poem and I loved it! Congrats on getting the editing position!!! :-)

  7. Hey, I luv this poem. It’s like spring-y. Congrats!

  8. Thanks very much for the feedback everyone. I felt like writing something nice and happy. Has anyone ever heard of something along the lines of “a horse and rider can light up the sky”? It might’ve just been me thinking but that was my inspiration :)

  9. Rain can ruin riding camps.I should know.