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Two Hearts, One Mind

Published by • Aug 11th, 2009 • Category: by Madelaina, Poetry

by Madelaina, age 13

Spirit high form needless wings,
Spearing us afar,
Over poles where planets sing,
Reaching vivid star.

Flying change a literal flight;
An airborne, stepping dance.
Grand as day our surreal might
Inspires hypnotic prance.

Coat blooming with trails of glows
Deep as a thousand seas
Reflect your mind, and how it knows
The thoughts inside of me.

The world’s glory in falter,
Think us a flawless kind
“How do you do it?” they utter,
We say, “Two hearts, one mind.”

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  1. Champion poem!!!! Is this aimed at jumpers?
    ~HF

  2. Wow………..just wow. It is an incredable use of worde, descriptions, power, to create a scene of love, trust, respect, beauty, and flight! I just love ‘Inspires hypnotic prance’. Great great great great great job girl! Keep it up!

  3. I love it!! You used such awesome and vivid details. I can’t decide which line is my favorite.

  4. Really cool poem, it sounded mysterious because its basically up to your own interpretation to figure out what it was about unless Madelaina says what its about :)

    ~Michelle

  5. I love this poem!It’s so beautiful,like the horse and girl are one.GHC has some WONDERFUL
    poets!

  6. ok it’s an amazing poem and is simply amazing! i love it!!!

  7. Wow, thank you all for your support! I’m so lucky to have everyone being so kind and also inspiring as well. I know I would definitely be worse off if not for GHC and its herd.

    HorseFeathers: Thank you :) The first verse is aimed at jumpers, but the second is aimed at dressage. It’s part of my message that working as one team can let you be multi-talented.

  8. Madelina, I am so proud of this poem! YOu are truly amazing! You should show it to your family!

  9. I have to admit, I’m jealous of your writing. The way you can put things into words amazes me. I always look forward to reading your writing. Thanks for sharing this with us.

  10. Your poetry has this…music to it, it’s almost magical. I luv it! Don’t stop writing!

  11. i c wat u mean about 2 hs 1 mind